轻松记单词,中小学英语培训实战日记

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660.bet 1轻松记单词:学习用品school
things

660.bet 2读双语作文学英语:我要去香港度假

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学习用品(school things)

I Am Going to Hong Kong for My Vacation我要去香港度假

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This summer, for my vacation, I’m going to Hong Kong with my mother. I
can visit Disneyland and lots of museums. It is also a wonderful place
for shopping. I have lots of things to buy, for example, I want to buy
some nice clothes, school things and interesting books. What’s more, I
can visit my aunt who works there, I think we will have a good time in
Hong
Kong。今年夏天,我要和妈妈去香港度假。我可以参观迪斯尼乐园和许多博物馆。香港还是一个购物的好地方。我有好多东西要买,例如,我要买些漂亮的衣服、学习用品和一些有趣的书。而且我还能见到在那里工作的姑姑。我相信我们在香港会过得很愉快。

在培训课上,我们经常让学生实战英语基础写作。现在我们来评改一篇初三年级学生的英语习作。

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词义解析:

习作题目梗概

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1.vacation:假期

我们学校的学生会组织了一个捐书活动。倡议初三年级的同学将使用过的书,报纸,还有材料捐给低年级的学生。其目的就是让同学们相互学习交流,减少浪费。

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2.visit:拜访,参观

Dear editor,

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3.Disneyland:迪士尼乐园

I’m a student of Junior Three in the middle school in Guangdong provide.
In our school, we have a activity. It’s let All students of junior three
donate the book, newspaper and some paper, they use to lower grade. The
active tv it is base is, the library or in our school on the first
floor. The time is joined tens, to join, I think this activity and
promotes, friendly and encourage economic, because, the first you can
know who read your book, and give him so advises to read the book, at
least you can be friends, the second, if you don’t donate books to the
somebody you will throw them. It very waste. so it’s good to protect the
environment againest pollution.All for all, this activity have a lot of
good thing. I am very support.

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4.museum:博物馆

yours sincerely

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5.wonderful:极好的

Li hua

(沪江英语)

6.interesting:有趣的

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660.bet,词组解析:

华附汕尾学校初三年级学生习作

1.for example:比如

亮点:

2.what’s more:而且

首先,这名同学努力地用英语组织题目上的信息。应该值得表扬。其次,他尽力用所学过的句型和结构(条件状语从句,宾语从句)来表达内容。具有用英语写作从整篇习作看,这位同学的写作能力达到了初中生的基本要求。

(沪江英语)

1.词汇上使用了donate(捐赠),promote(提升),encourage(鼓励),environment(环境)等均属比较高级的词汇。

  1. 使用了at least(至少)。

  2. 宾语从句: You can know who read the book.

不足:

1.
习作出现了较多的词汇拼写、时态、名词的单复数错误。这一点会在评分等级上受到很大的影响。需要注意!

  1. 虽然写作欲望强,但中式英语的痕迹比较重。It very wast.  All for all,
    this activity have lots of good things, I’m very support.

但作为一名初三的学生,能写这么多的内容也算是尽了最大的努力。这位同学在有限的时间内尽可能的把自己的想法用英语表达出来。也使用了一些课本上所学过的句型和结构。

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